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Not half bad

The lead synth you chose is rather odd, but otherwise this really gets two thumbs up from me :-D

djhathor23 responds:

thats the point lol i was just listening to different synths and this came up and i was like hmm...i hate it! but it was catchy lol

It's still copyright infringement

# You are making the legal claim that it is your own original work.
# Loops you made from existing copyrighted songs are not your own original work.

Saying that you used another artists song in your production does not give you the right to use it. See it as you want, but this IS copyright infringement and you should consider taking it down to avoid mentioned copyright problems.

L337-Manga responds:

so you're telling me the game "DJ Hero" is copy right infringement or such?

Too much going on

I'm new to rating things so I hope that "no stars" will now lower your rating.

There is too much going on at once. Adding even more will just make it sound even more confusing :)

My advice is to take out at LEAST one synth, maybe two, listen to each one on their own and try to focus on what element of the track you feel sounds best like it could carry your track. Right now it just sounds like several melodies are trying to get the attention.

Sometimes less is more. Define a bassline and a lead synth. Also I would try tuning down the volume of everything quite a bit, then try to adjust each instrument individually.

Hope that helps :)

Shichinohoshi responds:

Thank you for your review. To be honest, I meant to dump a bunch of sounds and effects in the song because I know I can't finish the song hence "sample". I appreciate your input. This is not my best work I'm afraid.

Thank you again.

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